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Thursday, November 6, 2014

The Everlasting Dream

I revised my short story, The Never-Ending Dream, and entered it into a writing contest.  I also renamed it The Everlasting Dream.  Wish me luck!  Here's the revised edition:



Autumn leaves crunched under my feet as I entered an old bookstore.  A bell on the door announced my arrival.  Old wooden shelves were overflowing with books stacked up to the ceiling.  Ladders and step stools were randomly placed in the aisles.  The scent of old books and a couple of gray tabby cats greeted me before the wizened shopkeeper did.  He was a thin man with glasses perched on the end of his nose and a shock of white, unruly hair.  He directed me to a miscellaneous section of used books.  In perusing the selection, I was able to find what I had been looking for:  A Guide to Interpret Dreams.  The book was an old brown hardcover with pages yellowed with age and gold embossed lettering on the spine.  I paid for my purchase and gave a farewell pat to the cats before I left.  The wind blew leaves across the sidewalk as I zipped up my fleece jacket and stuck my hands into my pockets.  The weather was getting colder as Halloween was rapidly approaching.  Pumpkins, witches and bats littered the storefronts.  

When I got home, I changed into my comfy flannel pajamas and sat down in my favorite rocker, pulling a fleece throw over my lap.  I held the book in my hands, studying the worn cover.  I had been having a reoccurring dream as of late, where I am alone on a dark night.  The only thing I could remember about the place was it was some kind of timeworn courtyard with a tiered stone fountain that featured a rather large water basin.  It reminded me of a wealthy European estate, built around the turn of the last century.  As I opened the book, I wondered if it would provide me with answers.  After reading a few pages about symbolism, I began to feel drowsy . . .   


I find myself in the dark of night, in the courtyard of my dream, wearing only a white gown.  I suddenly sense I am no longer alone.  I am frightened because I know a man is looking for me and what he wants from me.  I’ve dreamt of him before.  His seductive lure beckons me.  I cannot escape him.  Out of the darkness, he emerges.  His pale skin is a sharp contrast to his midnight black hair and cloak.  He takes a step towards me.  I back away into a hard stone surface.  I look behind me to discover it is the fountain.  I look into the water, and I suddenly see myself asleep in my home with the dream book.   

It's only a dream! I tell myself.  
I attempt to open my eyes, but they feel as though they are glued shut!  I look back at my pursuer, who is closing in faster than humanly possible.  Was he not just ten feet away?  He is right in front of me!  I will not run.  That will only entice the hunter in him.  Besides, I have nowhere to go.  He would catch me before I could take one step.  If flight is out of the question, the other option is to confront him.  
"Why are you keeping me here?!"  I demand.
He smiles, and I can see the hint of a fang glinting in the faint moonlight.  His dark eyes heighten with a hint of crimson.
A scream builds in the back of my throat, but I suppress it.  He wants me to fear him.  I attempt to open my eyes again, but I cannot.  No, there’s another way.
He reaches out to touch me.  I tumble backwards into the frigid water of the fountain.

I woke up in my chair, with the dream book in my hands.  I struggled to catch my breath.  My clothes were dry, but I was still shaking from fear and the thought of the chilly water.  It was only a dream; just a dream.  I went to the bathroom to splash water on my face.  As I stood in front of the mirror, drying my face, I discovered two small puncture wounds on my neck! 

Tuesday, October 28, 2014

Let Me Go

I recently watched this music video for Let Me Go by Avril Lavigne featuring Chad Kroeger.  It struck me as it reminded me of my own novel, The Whisperer of Storms.  I'm sure it happens to many writers/artists when they find something that reminds them of their own work.  First off, it's set in an older mansion, with the hardwood floors and those awesome vintage windows.  Not quite dated back to the Regency, but the house has an old-world look to it.  I also took note of the antique furniture with the blue couch and cheval mirror as my favorites.  Sheet draped furniture is an additional feature that struck a cord of familiarity.  My tale also features a pianoforte and the hour glass bears some significance.  This story may vary from mine, in addition to another's perspective of the video.  I gathered from it that she either died, or she left a long time ago.  Some may believe that the older fellow is channeling the younger man.  I think he's the same person.  The man feels old, but when he looks in the mirror, he's a younger version of himself.  Time is his enemy.  I've posted the video below if you care to see it.  I definitely think it has the look and feel of The Whisperer of Storms.  It is my hope the readers will also see the connection.   




I saw the movie Gone Girl last night.  Talk about unpredictable as it has quite a few twists!  I could not get into the author's mind for this one.  I may have to read the book someday.  Ben Affleck gave quite a performance.  I recommend it if you enjoy his movies, but be forewarned there's a graphic scene that I did not care for.

Ready for Halloween?  I have the kids' costumes together.  We'll be ready for some Trick-or-Treating on Friday.  Have a safe and Happy Halloween!

Veronica

Friday, October 24, 2014

Heaven is for Real Book Review

Heaven Is for Real: A Little Boy's Astounding Story of His Trip to Heaven and BackHeaven Is for Real: A Little Boy's Astounding Story of His Trip to Heaven and Back by Todd Burpo
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

I had seen this movie before I read the book. Heaven Is for Real is a true story about a little boy's journey to heaven during the battle of his life from a ruptured appendicitis.

If I hadn't seen the movie first, I think I would have had a hard time following the story. The prologue jumps to the summer after Colton's ordeal, then the first chapter takes us back to the beginning. I preferred the order of events in the movie over the book. Regardless, Colton's illness, in addition to his recovery, was a much longer and rocky road. I flew through that part of the book. The story brings hope and comfort to those who have lost loved ones. In addition to giving us an idea what to expect when we make our own journey.

It's a wonderful story that I think every Christian family should read.
The one irony of Colton's story that boggles my mind, the people who should believe him are the biggest skeptics!





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Monday, September 15, 2014

Beauty's Beast by Amanda Ashley

Beauty's BeastBeauty's Beast by Amanda Ashley
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

Beauty's Beast is Beauty and the Beast meets The Phantom of the Opera. Kristine, condemned for murder, escapes the executioner's blade when the cursed lord of Hawksbridge Castle buys her to be his bride.

I've been looking forward to this book ever since I read a sneak peek. I'm a fan of anything B&tB and this tale didn't disappoint. The plot was interesting and stayed true to the classic tale. Even so, I found parts of it to be unpredictable. There was a part in the book that reminded me of Maiden's Song, but the plot twisted from there. One thing that frustrates me is I can't remember the name of the book I read that begins the same way with the condemned heroine. They cut her hair off, too. I wish I could remember the title, but it continues to elude me.

I recommend this book if you love Beauty and the Beast and/or The Phantom of the Opera. Another good read from Ms. Ashley!




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Friday, September 12, 2014

10 Books That Have Never Left You

Here's my list of 10 books that have never left me, in no particular order.

1.  Beauty and the Beast by Gabrielle-Suzanne Barbot de Villeneuve
2.  A Rose in Winter by Kathleen Woodiwiss
3.  Jane Eyre by Charlotte Bronte
4.  Until Forever by Johanna Lindsey
5.  The Bride and the Beast by Teresa Medeiros
6.  Immortal Sins by Amanda Ashley
7.  The Giving Tree by Shel Silverstein
8/9. Lords of Midnight series by Teresa Medeiros
10. Left Behind by Tim LaHaye & Jerry B. Jenkins

What are your books?  It doesn't have to be a list; you could name only one or two books that have stayed with you.

I continue to work on revisions for The Whisperer of Storms.  I have a tendency to head-hop with POV, thus I'm remedying that.  I have more time to work on revisions now that school has started.
  
Have a good weekend!

Veronica

Tuesday, August 26, 2014

Jayce

It's been a difficult couple of weeks.  I used to marvel at how my class made it all the way through high school and had two reunions without losing any fellow classmates.  Unfortunately, the inevitable happened.  It hit very close to home.  He was an old friend of mine; taken away from us too soon.  Apart from family, he was my first friend.  I keep waiting to wake up and realize it was only a nightmare.  He can't really be gone.  But he is.  Instead of Hope in the cemetery like Christine Daae wishing he was somehow here again, it's me.  Now, I have the life experience to write about an unexpected death.  I now truly understand the emotions enough to describe them and to make them believable.

I started writing again and I never told him.  He'll never know how much of an influence he had been.  I had captured our friendship in two of my characters in The Whisperer of Storms.  He was my Jayce.  Selfless, loyal, dependable, and gifted.  I find that working on Jayce's character development is therapeutic for me.  It's my way of keeping his memory alive and of letting the world know him.  I think many people who know me will be surprised that I wrote The Whisperer of Storms before he died.  I only wish he knew.

Every morning, I wake up in blissful forgetfulness and it takes a few seconds for me to remember that he's gone.  Many say that we find forgetfulness in sleep.  Then, we wake every morning and the reality sets in that they're gone.  Is it truly forgetfulness, or is it comfort?  Perhaps it is only in sleep that we can hear them speaking to us?

Hold your loved ones close and get in touch with a friend that you haven't seen in a while.  You never know when someone you hold dear will be taken away from you.

Veronica  

Monday, August 4, 2014

Stormy Persuasion by Johanna Lindsey

Stormy Persuasion (Malory-Anderson Family, #11)Stormy Persuasion by Johanna Lindsey
My rating: 3 of 5 stars

I enjoyed reading another book from the Malory series. I sometimes had a hard time remembering extended family members from previous books. A family tree would have come in handy. I had a little difficulty focusing on the romance between the main characters, due to a vast number of characters in the story. It left me looking forward to the next novel in the series, which I'm guessing will be Jack Malory's story. I'm left wondering what really happened to her during her ordeal? Hopefully, the next book will elaborate more on it. I recommend this one if you love the Malory's. There's plenty of James and Anthony, but not enough Jeremy.

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